Oh IOC, oh IOC, how you will be the death of me. (Christmas is coming....eventually...)
Self Grade: How I think I did & why I think I did it
Criterion A: 6
I know the context of the text well, and refer back to the text multiple times on my comments, and therefore all comments are subsequently linked to the text, yet I believe I definitely could have improved the references by making them more specific, and explaining in greater depth.
Criterion B: 4
I need to add more Fiidds/ Sparse most definitely, as I feel I focused more on the guiding questions rather than breaking the text down into literary devices
Criterion C: 4
After seeing many people comment on their down fall on this section, I made it a point to follow a specific structure of Intro, context, Thesis, Question 1(example, comment), Question 2 (repeat), Conclusion (restate thesis and back it up), and a quick little comment on what i found interesting.
Criterion D: 3
Talking to yourself is weird. It is obvious that a stuttered, feel awkward, and sometime revert to repeating something I've said. Scholarly and pedantic language will come eventually, it's just a matter of practice and comfort level.

